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Slaves of society

Blaming anxiety

Watch the manufacture of perfect men

 

Followed the norm

Since you were born

Trying hard not to step out the box

 

In the distance

Hear tales of resistance

Against creating a perfect you

 

And even if it’s the last thing I do

I’ll keep bleeding the truth and

Bleeding what is right from wrong and

I’ll bleed till I bleed my last breath

 

I’m only one

Trying to run

From factory made humanity

 

An accident of society

An outcast of humanity

Just trying to create a better us

 

So I take it all in

Let the rebellion begin

And try to create a revolution

 

And even if it’s the last thing I do

I’ll keep bleeding the truth and

Bleeding what is right from wrong and

I’ll bleed till I bleed my last breath

 

A puppet on a string

Watch the riot begin

You wonder why you speak their script

 

Hear words of fire

Lust and desire

You start to step out the box

 

Trying to relate

With a world of hate

Trust me to give up on that want

 

And even if it’s the last thing I do

I’ll keep bleeding the truth and

Bleeding what is right from wrong and

I’ll bleed till I bleed my last breath

 

So watch the revolution

Hear the evolution

Breathe the revelation

Sound the protestation

 

Of a better humanity

Of a humane society


 

 

Just a little poem....:>
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angellicfire Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
Perfect and SOOOOO true!!!!! I love it!
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Sunflowers-And-Fur Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
This is so creative and amazing!
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pozolegirl Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool! :D
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aidantheawsome123 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
Utterly amazing! and true. I think you have done a very good job!
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dontletthecrazygirl Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
this is perfectly unperfect absolutely amazing 
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LindaBostic Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Smashing!
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XMajutsu-shiX Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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AriannaTheKeybearer Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I could see an amazing image of those who are trying to bring the truths of society forward but as punishment, all forms of authority figures, some who may be less progressed in terms of tolerance, are corrupted by greed, etc.. Punish these people in the worst ways, with physical pain, removing the people they love just to keep a stagnant and 'perfect' world, but there are truths that the public doesn't know yet.. That could save the world.
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XMajutsu-shiX Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student General Artist
Imhappy you get the picture!Thanks for taking the time to write this comment! I appreciate it! :>
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AriannaTheKeybearer Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem. ^.^
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